Tamil Poem Part 1

This is my first poem in tamil. Dedicated to a special someone :p hehe

1st translation in tanglish:

un kaikaL thottaal en manam paRapaRakkum
un kaNkaL ennaip parththaal en ithayam sirikkum
un uthadugaL sErnthaal en naadiththudippu athikarikkum
en vaazhkai un kaiyil samarppikkiREn

2nd translation in english: (it doesnt sound the best in english :-) )

when your hands touch, my heart becomes light and fly
when your eyes look at me, my heart begins to smile
when your lips unite, my heart starts to beat fast
i surrender my life into your hands

ps: its direct translation.. so its sounds abit weird but the same kind of expression :)